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Character 101:
Creating great characters is an art unto itself, separate from
storytelling. So, what are the basics? A great character is someone
the reader wants to spend time with. Whether they're loved or
hated, great characters intrigue and draw us in. The best writers
are able to walk that line between universality and uniqueness,
loading a character with both. A reader needs to understand a
character and feel this is exactly what the character would do
given the situation and the character's past. The reader is taken
on a ride with this character, learning more about them as they
go.
That's pretty general. So, what are the specifics? Whether you're
a novice or an old pro, a quick primer on the general rules can't
hurt.
The Name
How do you find the perfect name? Most of the time it either strikes
you immediately or you change it fifty times and finally give
up. Here are a couple of conventions to help out:
- Bad guys generally have hard names to pronounce or, at least,
contain hard sounds like the "g" sound.
- Heroes usually have common names like John or Jack. The hero
is supposed to be a more universal character that everyone relates
to. A more common name helps accomplish this.
- Many times the hero is referred to by his or her first name,
while other male characters are referred to by their last name.
- Female characters are usually referred to by first names.
Unless, she is on the bad guy's team, then, we refer to her
by her last name.
- Don't make the characters' names too alike and avoid starting
different names with the same letter.
- Consider using nicknames for a character or two. Or, perhaps,
a character uses his middle name as his name, or has made up
a whole new name for himself. Mixing these up a little will
add realism to naming your characters.
The Description
- Basic rule: Keep it short. Readers like to see a character
reveal herself through dialogue and action. They also like to
create the image in their heads. You can definitely help them
along with well-placed details, but a laundry list of physical
traits and clothing choices is not recommended. In novels, adding
a few lines about history or attitude are helpful and can be
a lot of fun to write. But in screenplays, leave it out. If
you can't see or hear it, it doesn't belong.
- Associate objects with the character, like a ring, a haircut,
or some other item that clues us into his world.
- In your story, keep the description of your main characters
separate from your other descriptions. This will set them apart
from other characters and the background.
The Occupation
What your character has chosen for a career can be one of the biggest
ways to add insight into the way your character thinks.
- What's important to her? How would this affect the choice
of career?
- Would money be an issue?
- Is he building a career or simply paying the bills?
- What's her ultimate dream and does this job lead there?
The Dialogue
- Try to stay away from heavy dialects. Of course, there are
plenty of exceptions to this rule, but, generally, they frustrate
the reader.
- Make sure every character's dialogue is differentiated from
the other characters.
- Avoid having a character state the sub-text. Some writers
write a scene "on the nose" the first time, then go back and
hide what's really being said behind dialogue or note it in
the margins so they can keep track of what's really being said.
The best dialogue says volumes without really saying what it's
saying.
- Keep it consistent. Using Character
Writer can help with the always-on-top Writing Mode feature.
- Put opposites together as much as possible, a scene with a
shy person and an outgoing person can produce some interesting
dialogue.
The Motivation
- Keep it simple. Whether we like a character or not, we have
to understand what motivates her, and it has to be universal
enough to appeal to a lot of people. Being motivated for revenge
is easy and effective. Being motivated to collect stamps is
not so easy.
- The reader has to understand the motivation of every
character.
- If your character was approached by a Fairy Godmother at the
very beginning of the story and told he has one wish, what would
he ask for?
- The two greatest motivators are: 1) stopping a situation that
creates or will create suffering, or 2) starting a situation
that alleviates suffering. Perhaps it's represented by an object,
like the world's largest diamond... or love. But, the motivation
is usually to eliminate suffering.
- Every character in a story needs a clear motivation, even
the guy delivering the flowers.
- Great characters have an inner goal and an outer goal. Each
links to the other, but can be conflicting.
The Emotions
- Design situations that will bring out every emotion in the
hero. We want to see her laugh, cry, suffer, and finally be
happy. The best situation to bring out character emotions is
to threaten or destroy something or someone she cares about.
- We need to know how each character feels about the other characters.
How this comes out is up to the author, but it must be made
clear if someone hates someone else and why.
- A great technique is to use private moments, when the character
is alone, to reveal how she really feels about someone or something.
- Everything that happens to a character affects his inner emotions--how
he feels about himself, or others (like the bad guy), or the
situation itself (upset at life).
- Determine your character's dominant emotion. Does she represent
happiness in the face of misery, or, maybe, utter hatred. It's
important to set a dominant emotion.
The Character Arc
- Determine the direction of your character's arc. Is the character
getting more healthy or less healthy.
- Convention: A hero changes and that change helps him attain
the goal. Villains generally don't change and because she doesn't
change, she loses the goal.
- A great arc can be when a character learns to care about someone
or something other than themselves.
The Backstory
- Create a character bio. It doesn't have to be long, but it's
invaluable. Character Writer helps you develop one and will
keep countless details straight and consistent throughout the
writing process.
- Understand where your character is coming from, physically
as well as emotionally. A person is the sum of her experiences.
What has this character experienced in the past that will affect
how she acts in your story.
- Give every character a life away from the story, so they're
not just there for the story. Perhaps he has a hobby or other
interest, like writing.
The Character Flaw
- A simple way to determine a character flaw is to look at the
story and figure out a belief your character holds that makes
attaining the goal impossible. Perhaps, he refuses to forgive
someone, or is scared to death of snakes. During the story,
he learns to overcome that flaw.
- The character sees the flaw as a strength at first, but eventually
discovers why it's a weakness and that it's in the way of achieving
the goal.
The Character Theme
The story has a theme, so do great characters.
- Determine a character's theme in one word -- smart, funny,
troubled, angry, determined -- and stick with it.
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